2008年4月28日月曜日

Paragraph writing exercise

Why should high school students participate in club activities?

Firstly, to participate in club activities makes high school students tough and builds up their bodies.For example, when I was a high school student, I joined the badminton club and was in training there. It made me healthy, and I become sensitive to my own health. Furthermore, students become more active, even if they aren't in a sports club. Secondly, club activity helps students individual psychological development. When they achieve something, for example win a game ,or play a difficult piece well,they can get a great sense of accomplishment. In addition,
because of these experiences, students become more mentally strong and patient. Finally, students learn social development in club activities. Students are able to have a many personal relationships without distinction of age. Therefore they get a spirit of coorperation show good teamwork. From these things, a sense of responsibility develops between them. Therefore it's clear that club activities support students physical development, individual psychological development, and social development.

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Yusuke さんのコメント...

Distinguished paragraph. By reading it I thought we need a small introduction. If you put this in at your work it will be more stronger. I learnt many thing from reading your paragraph thank you.